23 | Writing Economics
basic model is used throughout the paper and holds together all that
follows. Feldstein cites a number of authors who have observed this
regularity in empirical data on personal savings patterns as confirmation
of the model. He goes on to argue that while the “hump-savings” model
works well to explain most of the observed data, the effect of certain
government policies on individual savings has never been measured em-
pirically. In particular, he poses the question: What is the effect of social
security on individuals’ lifetime savings? He then cites the work of three
other authors as well as his own earlier work as examples of this neglect.
In this way, Feldstein presents his current research as a necessary
development out of well established research program, the next question
to ask on a line stemming from important ancestors to contemporary
scholarly research. The reader is thus prepared for the empirical analysis
that follows, which shows that “social security depresses personal savings
by 30–50 percent” (Martin Feldstein, 1974).
PRESENTING YOUR HYPOTHESIS
The literature review sets out the issues that motivate your paper and
demonstrates your familiarity with what others have written on the topic.
The next step is to formulate a specific question, problem, or conjecture,
and to describe the approach you will take to answer, solve, or test it.
Often, this will take the form of an empirical hypothesis: “social security
depresses personal savings;” “high levels of employment are related to
high levels of inflation,” etc. An empirical hypothesis makes a claim about
how some part of the economy works, and can be assessed by analyzing
the relevant data.
In presenting your hypothesis, you need to discuss the data set you are
using and, in most cases, the type of regression you will run. You should
say where you found the data, and use a table, graph, or simple statistics
to summarize them. You should explain how the data relate to your
hypothesis and note any problems they pose. If you have only a small set
of observations, or have to use proxies for data you cannot directly
observe, you should explicitly acknowledge this.
For example, in “Employment -based Health Insurance and Job
Mobility: Is There Evidence of Job-lock?,” Brigitte Madrian (1994) writes:
To study the phenomenon of job-lock, one would like information on
individual and family health status, worker mobility, and the health
insurance plans of both the firm for which and individual works and to
which one could move. Unfortunately, information on health status
and health insurance is not widely available in labor force surveys,
information on worker mobility is not typically available in health
surveys, and information on insurance plans of companies for which
an individual could have worked is nonexistent.